Thursday 18 March 2010

Three development ideas

ok so i've put one set of lyrics up on here. these are the final two... Coming home - which although me and larry wrote all the lyrics between us - larry and i together wrote the chorus and i wrote both verses - now i know this comment will piss a few people off - such as sub zero - but it's truth therefore i'm using it as one of my developed ideas :) any one with any objections can take them elsewhere.

ok so coming home lyrics....

ch/ 'Mama' i'm coming home,
'Mama' i'm coming home,
I've been away for so long,
But 'Mama' i'm coming home.

v1/ The things i do, the things i see,
Having fun with my family,
Running along the beach in the sun,
I don't remember having so much fun.

(chorus.. with harmony added)

v2/ The places i've been, the people i've seen,
I've been lucky to have followed my dream,
But now i'm back, and that's for sure,
The world will give me so much more.

(chorus with harmonies)

Middle Eight Instrumental (2 cycles)

(chorus with harmonies)

v3/ The things i do, the things i see,
Having fun with my family,
Running along the beach in the sun,
I don't remember having so much fun.

(chorus x2)

And i'm in the process of writing another set of lyrics at the moment so will publish these on my blog as soon as i have finished writing them :)

3 comments:

  1. i havvnt got a problem but the only comment i will make is that there was more than just you and larry in the room at the time!!! Everybody of whome was involved with the song should get the recognition!!!

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  2. ok, yeah i agree that there was input from other people in the making of the song such as Simon, AJ, and Becky and i know it was your starting point, yet i just felt as though only sub zero has been recognised as writing the song. Plus, by cutting out the admittedly dreadful harmonies, i felt slightly cut out from the whole making and production of the song. Just voicing my opinion - not actually properly bitching. What i put was possibly a bit harsh - i just wrote what i felt at the time. Just think a few of us need to be kept slightly more in the loop and up-to-date and at the end of it all feel as though we will have recognition for helping to make the song. Just extending the thoughts after our talk on it at college. thanks glyn :)

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  3. Any concerns or ideas then i am approachable its just i am so busy working for other people that its been difficult to keep up ive actually been in a way neglecting other projects like coming home but that is slowly turning around now as im nearly done with the degree students stuff so all being well coming home will develope just after easter, cus its worth doing for the final release its the most commercial song im involved in and dont worry everyvbody will get recognised in the end even if it dont feel like it at the mom

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