LYRICS!!!!!

ok.... i mentioned that i'd written lyrics to a song i am in the process of writing on logic..... well.... these are the lyics :) It's called Broken Child

Broken Child

v1/ Down in the park,

In the lonely hours.

Not a child in sight,

Just a single growing flower.

v2/ And yet in the dark,

A child will weep.

The same little girl,

Who's planting flowers in her sleep.

chorus/ And yet here she stands,

On a cold, dark, lonely night

Alone and broken,

Not the will left to fight.

v3/ The wind in the trees,

Will whistle a tune to her.

The same little tune,

That would send her to sleep.

v4/ The day that he came,

Her life turned around.

She was beaten and kicked,

'til she couldn't hold out no more.

(chorus....)

last line/ Not the will left to fight.....

It's only minimal - i haven't done anything much - just standard verse/chorus which is the same tune throughout and still needs work. but there's the basic lyrics :D

This i'm also hoping can be used as one of my three developed ideas.... so any feedback will be apreciated :)